The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
Worship & praise definitely unifies believers if we're all one in purpose while doing it. Refreshing story. Would love to see the paragraphs double-spaced to make it easier to read.

Your story makes me want to "gather at the river." :)
10/12/07
I definitely wanted to read more, especially about how your little group percieved "the troubles". You had lots of words left--more atmosphere would be great. Make us FEEL Ireland in your writing.
10/12/07
Sounds like a wonderful experience. I was definitely drawn in. I would love to see a bit more detail of what is going on (maybe a touch more "showing" rather than "telling."). Keep writing!