The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
So creative to write the piece from a sermon. I love this line:
“We are to be of one heart, but our hearts are divided into many denominations. We are to be of one mind, but our thoughts are dissonant, like sour notes of praise."
I could feel the rafters vibrating!
10/12/07
I can just hear this dear man preaching!

Watch out for using a mixture of present and past tenses, and I caught a few spelling errors: pinnacle and a capella (two words) stood out.

A precious story, definitely.
10/12/07
Excellent message.

My opinion, but I think this might have been a bit stronger if you had just told the story, rather than having the pastor do it. Just my thought.

We all need to hear this. Thank you for sharing it.