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TITLE: Fearful Heart | Previous Challenge Entry
By Wesley Hesketh
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
on this summers’ day.
Birds arriving home again,
children run and play.
The ticking of the clock
time goes fleeing by.
I try to live within each tick,
but I can only try.
I look around with sadness
and see the mess I’m in.
Sucked up in the mire,
covered with my sins.
What will happen to my life?
only You can say.
You are the truth,and the light,
quietly I pray.
Oh God tell my story
so I can plainly see.
Everything You do,
I know You love me.
Thank You for Your blessings,
You’ve opened up my eyes.
You calmed my fearful heart,
You quieted my cries.
With sweet persuasion
You’re showing me the way.
Nudging me forward,
helping me to pray.
On this summers’ morning
I open up my soul.
I'm asking You to come in,
making my life whole.
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Small editing note: summers' day should be summer's day.
All in all you did a nice job with this heartfelt plea.