The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
Wow! Powerful and masterfully written.The persuasive voice of God protecting His child... I loved this, great job! God Bless~
09/09/11
God is good! This story touches my heart. He pursue us with His love! Amazing!
This is a great story. It should be required reading for every 16 yo driver and her parents. Nice job!
09/14/11
WOW; you got my attention!
Very nice work!
I had a friend who heard God's voice in a similar situation. He was instructed to pull off the interstate once or twice. He finally did. A vehicle approached from the wrong direction; he would have been hit head on!God can still speak in an audible voice.
09/14/11
This is a great take on persuasion. Very true to life too.
09/15/11
Congratulations. God bless~
09/15/11
Congratulations! What a great story!
09/21/11
Great story, Anne. I really liked the opening sentence ... "Gravel spit from under the wheels of the big Ford LTD as I tore out of the driveway and headed for home."

Nice choice of words and great beginning action to entice the reader. :)