The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/08
My son really enjoys the story of Jonah, this kind of puts a new twist on it for when he gets older. It reads to me like a devotional for tens-tweens. Great job.
09/07/08
I love your descriptions inside the whale and especially love the one about the whale on land. Too funny and probably true, too! There is one place that you seem to quote scripture. That should be in quotes. You did a good job on this piece!