The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
Is this a paraphrase of a Psalm?
I could hear the prayers and cries of David in your words.
Interesting!
Living through a church split and being falsely accused this past year, I feel the pain of the writer here.
I enjoyed reading your article. I felt it was a little difficult to understand (inaccessible), as my poetry sometimes is. Good reasoning of the topic.
01/17/08
Anyone who had ever been in spiritual warfare understands your story. Good writing.
01/18/08
Evokes emotion of all types. Great piece.
01/19/08
very powerful view of our life's struggle to remember who is truly in control
Definitely reads like a psalm. The word are poetic, lovely, and truthful. I'm not quite sure how well it fits the topic, but it's really beautiful.
01/21/08
Though the topic may be somewhat shrouded in the content, this is outstanding work and certainly not level I. Very, very well done.