The Official Writing Challenge
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The fact that when we are struggling and we help others in need is one of the greatest lessons we can learn in life. That is the message that stands out to me in your story. Nice job!
06/12/06
Under his pain and profound sadness, he still has moments of personal peace. Those moments will grow longer and longer, perhaps. This could be a short story. Nicely done with a good flow.
06/12/06
I feel I should comment on this, it is well written, and has a strong message - really quite creatively done. I had to reread it a coouple of times to get the jest - there are many stories here - you shared one; my guess more will come.
06/30/06
Steve, what a heartbreaker, and yet your narrator is managing to hang on to those moments of peace that are left to him. You are a masterful writer, and I am glad to see the recognition you're receiving.