The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the idea behind this piece a lot. Many people continue to judge a book by its cover.

Everything was moving along quite well, but the ending seems a little too contrite. Try extending it out just a bit. Perhaps a longer conversation between the girls. The narrator seems to "get it" a little too fast.

But again, great concept. Good work.
06/12/06
Looks can be deceiving. Nice job overall.