The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/06
Lots of good thoughts here. Good advice at the end. Maybe wanders a little in between. A space between paragraphs make it easier to read, I think. Keep at it. You're on the right track.
06/12/06
Good sentiment here, but difficult to read with no white space. Overall, I like the message - I like the John 4:24 reference.