The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes! the glorious purpose of being conformed to His image...transformation.

I think you have the right idea; this poem definitely wants to be free verse. To give this piece's genre a more clear identity, you might want to focus on alliteration and other poetic devices instead of internal rhyme. A great message, and you have some beautiful phrases and thoughts here!
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06/07/06
"So I walked...." The regular repeating of that phrase is very effective in giving this entry a sense of motion! Nice work, taking your reader along on your transformation journey, becoming conformed to the image of Christ Jesus! God bless your writing.