The Official Writing Challenge
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I think I heard the flies buzzing! This was so well written and the drawl was just right. Well done.
Hee haw! Very cleverly done. I loved it! So proud of myself for guessing the end...I think the fact she knew it was a "1930’s GMC ½ ton pick-up truck" comin' down the road alerted my sniffer! Thanks for a totally enjoyable read!

Very good story! I agree that the drawl was right, southern in words and in action. :) You had a good way of describing what was happening, too. One nit-pickey thing, you used "he" alot to start your sentences. Anyway, thanks for this sweet story!
Congrats on your win! Quite the honor to obtain that blue ribbon! Great work!
Love it. Conrats on your win!

Congrats Kaylee and welcome to FW! This was a fun story. Taking the blue ribbon with only your 2nd entry is quite an accomplishment. : - )
I'm so proud of you, Kaylee! Didn't realize you had joined FW until a few days ago--it was a delightful surprise. :-)