The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/06
I think I heard the flies buzzing! This was so well written and the drawl was just right. Well done.
06/01/06
Hee haw! Very cleverly done. I loved it! So proud of myself for guessing the end...I think the fact she knew it was a "1930’s GMC ˝ ton pick-up truck" comin' down the road alerted my sniffer! Thanks for a totally enjoyable read!

06/03/06
Very good story! I agree that the drawl was right, southern in words and in action. :) You had a good way of describing what was happening, too. One nit-pickey thing, you used "he" alot to start your sentences. Anyway, thanks for this sweet story!
06/08/06
Congrats on your win! Quite the honor to obtain that blue ribbon! Great work!
06/08/06
Love it. Conrats on your win!

Blessings,
Trina
06/08/06
Congrats Kaylee and welcome to FW! This was a fun story. Taking the blue ribbon with only your 2nd entry is quite an accomplishment. : - )
06/08/06
I'm so proud of you, Kaylee! Didn't realize you had joined FW until a few days ago--it was a delightful surprise. :-)