The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
This is a keeper! Cute - I didn't figure out it was a dog until nearly the end. Nicely done :)
05/19/06
This is creative writing, for sure! Some technical help would polish your work. For example: Do check the dictionary definition to see if the word you use means what you intend. (I don't think you really wanted "perspective.") Also, double check that singular subjects have singular verbs ("everyone...his" not "their"). God bless your writing! You do know how to grab your reader.
05/22/06
Good job. I liked : 'He was a steady ship, slow to turn.' - seems to encapsulate the whole piece. Well done.
05/22/06
This is a good way to write from an animal's POV--I liked it. Perhaps a bit of a stretch to get it to line up with the topic, however? I could easily visualize Winston--you wrote him well.