The Official Writing Challenge
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This needs a little technical work (editing and clarifying the dialog so we aren't confused as to who is speaking). But, you have a creative story for getting your message across to your readers, and I enjoyed reading it. God bless your work!
Inspiring piece. Glad you eavesdropped that day!
Awesome! Can't wait to read "the rest of the story" once you're both published!
Biggest thing I can add is pryaing God will give you favor with whomever you need favor and order your steps so you'll be in the right place at the right time. Noting is impossible with God!!! Good job.
Some technical structure problems - a little work and this will be good.