The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/06
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I feel that way too sometimes. There is only one thing I know that gives me peace that passes all understanding. JESUS! Nice writing! God bless ya, littlelight
02/08/06
So many people feel this way. You have managed to express it with clarity and candour. There is always Jesus to turn to to show you a way out. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
02/08/06
I like the was you framed this piece to heighten your feelings of aimlessness. Try to avoid references to "you" as in the 2nd paragraph, and be careful with end punctuation at ends of paragraphs. This is very effective as a moody piece.
Short, simple, sweet and superb thought. Well expressed.