The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/06
You did a wonderful job of capturing Grace's childlike voice.
01/09/06
Gripping.I started reading loudly,but towards the end I had become silent...with tears.
01/09/06
A very touching story. You have a writing style that pulls the reader right in. The ending made me wonder if this is a real child that you or someone you know sponsors. If not, you certainly made me feel like you know Grace somehow. Well done!
01/10/06
This piece was well thought out and well written. Good writing leaves you unable to distinguish the story from fiction or nonfiction. You have accomplished that! Great job!
Well done! This piece rang true to me. The simplicity of the child's voice held impact.
What a charming perspective for this topic. Wonderful job!
You have captured the childs voice well and delivered an expressive and touching piece. Nicely done. God bless