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01/10/06
This was a well researched peace. I am wondering why you always refer to God as Dear God. I found this to be somewhat of a distraction as I read.
01/11/06
I am not quite sure what this piece had to do with "escape", in fact I do not recall even seeing the word. Always check grammar because when there are mistakes it detracts the focus from what it is you are truly trying to say. I liked the point you were making.
01/12/06
Dear Function: As a noun means a LOVED ONE..
"SWEETHEART" is a lovable person.
It is appropriate to say Dear God esp. if you have a personal relationship with Him.
After all he is a loved one. He is our everything which I would call him a sweetheart too. I LIKE WHAT YOU WROTE HERE.
The joy and love that you share with Him is loving Him when you share with your friends and family. Look up to Him and know that He is (IN) control, it is all written.. and that is that!!! For HE IS Almighty God and in control!
I added a few changes for I'm sure this is what you meant to say...keep up the good work..God will annoint your every word...you write from His inspiration!
May Dear Yeshua Bless you!
Norma