The Official Writing Challenge
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Quite interesting how you handled this topic linking the present with the past. I liked it. His blood was shed for us and from that you can deal with your own pain.
Powerful! Having lost an unborn child, I can relate. I liked the comparison to Mary's pain. Well written.
You did a nice job of showing the pain of the two mothers. I could feel it as i read and it drew me into the story. I think you did a nice job with it.