The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this story. It really touched my heart. You did an excellent job of developing the characters. I especially like how he respected the family's pride and offered an exchange instead of a handout. This was a great story.
11/04/12
I loved this endearing story of the elder man and young boy uniting to help others...great work!
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level one!