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05/31/12
I loved this entire piece. It was thought provoking. I enjoyed the tone, and meaning...and the questions your piece brings forward.

I especially loved this part: "Just because you don't feel the Spirit doesnít mean He is not here!" I believe if you are a child of God you always have the Spirit of God because He lives in you He is part of you He lives in your heart and operates through you by the power of the blood that Christ shed on the cross for you.." Amen. Thank you for this.
God Bless~
You make some interesting points for sure. I like how you posed some of your questions.

You may want to enlist in a challenge buddy to help you catch some typos like straddling instead of strattling, final instead of finale. You also may want to put the Bible verses in italics so they stand out more.

I enjoy articles that make me think and you did ask some great questions to help the reader to look deep and figure out what she believes. Nice job.