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You covered the topic in a fresh way.

I did have difficulty following you from time to time. It seemed like the flow was interrupted by a sudden change of topic. I think if you gave more information about the TV show or the sermon that would have helped me too.

I like your message. There are some awful things on the internet. How blessed we are to have Jesus in our lives.
12/06/11
Good job and a well done take on this topic. You crafted a well written piece with a great message.

I enjoyed this. Thanks!