The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/11
Well written, well said, greatest story ever told about God's heavenly download/upload.
This is really lovely. I enjoyed the flow and rhythm of it.

Although you used the words in your poem, it wasn't really covering the topic but it is a nice analogy.

This is really lovely. I could see it on a plaque or a greeting card.
12/06/11
This was a lovely piece. Yet, I agree that it may have obnly lightly touched the topic. But this was very well written.

Nice work!