The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/11
You have so many classic lines like, "Your father...would loosen his necktie and run his fingers through his comb-over." Your entry has a lot of depth and fantastic internal dialogue, Ö this is wonderfully creative for the topic!
Loved it! Loved it! Level it! His dialog was dead on and you have a great sense of humor!
01/31/11
great writing. title was a bit enigmatic but i loved the first person voice that you told this in.
02/03/11
hey! super congrats on your highly commended yellow bar! You are on a roll! :)