The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/11
A heart rending story that too many people have had to face. Well written, and I HOPE it was just a story!
I found myself holding my breath. You did an outstanding job capturing the feelings of so many of that generation. I was sure he was going to dump her although it's sad he died; I'm glad he didn't just leave her sitting there.
01/30/11
Wonderfully done; a "Hallmark" story.
01/31/11
aww great story
02/02/11
Your story held such a romantic feeling without being too flowery.

I cried while reading it.
Congratulations for placing 11th in level one!