The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/10
You made great use of the topic for your devotional thought. One small suggestion would be to put direct quotes from the Bible in quotation marks and possibly add a few more breaks in the paragraphs. Overall a very good entry!
You make some great points in this sweet story. Well done.
11/13/10
Good flow, easy to read, liked the take on the topic and the overall message of this devotional. Good writing.
Hope you're monitoring your email along with your spiritual inbox. Excellent entry and deserving of your 1st place win AND EC! Congratulations!
11/18/10
You put a lot of thought and creativity into this devotional. Gave me a lot to ponder. Congrats on your EC.!
Congratulations on your EC! See you in the next level. :)