The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
sounds a lot like a journal entry. could have set the scene with that first. but otherwise: yeah, yeah, yeah! Love the references to the awesomely cool music.
09/13/05
Spaces between paragraphs would make this easier to read. Nice essay about contentment in one's circumstances.
09/14/05
paragraphs, paragraphs, please. I like the detail.