The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/09
I liked this, you were very thorough in explaining all the aspects of the hot and cold elements. It's tricky to get the spacing down between the paragraphs, I've had some trouble with that myself. After you save it as a text file, go back and add the extra line in between, it makes it easier on the eyes.
04/21/09
I liked the way you started this! It made me laugh.
In a title, the first and last all important words should be capitalized.
Good thoughts.