The Official Writing Challenge
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Since most of this is an account right out of The Book, was this written as a church sermon?
If not, I would have liked more from the personal view of Baruch, more creative writing.
A good Sunday piece.
An interesting piece on a story not often told!
Try writing from one character's point of view, to give a different perspective on a story.
I had trouble seeing the topic of "hot and cold" in this.
Keep it up!