The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
Ahh...what a happy ending! Good descriptions and dialogue. I'm not sure the title fit, but the message was good.
Wow the ending brought tears to my eyes. this was very good.
09/21/08
I really enjoyed your story, the end could have been expanded a little more, but othersise I was really drawn in. Thanks for sharing.
09/24/08
This was good, the first paragraph was exceptional. My interest was there throughout, good job!