The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. A gentle reminder that God is always near.

I am not well-versed in the mechanics of poetry, so to me everything is perfect.
09/18/08
Beautiful poem! Vivid descriptions and analogy. Well done!
09/19/08
Someone once said that without prayer we can do nothing - I agree and like your poem.
Wow this is excellent.
Wow. Never underestimate the power of prayer. This is wonderfully written. Great job. Congratulations on placing. God Bless.