The Official Writing Challenge
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I love free verse, but I wished there were a few spaces somewhere in this to break it up into some kind of ryhthm. It was good, I can definitely relate and I know many (myself included) who don various masks to keep up a charade. Nicely done, you've hit on some raw, good emotion. ^_^
I love the title; it makes me think that the narrator here may be a high school student. Even if not, I think this would be a great discussion-starter for youth groups.
Hi: You are so right we all wear masks of some sort - thank you