The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/08
Wow! You caught me! I didn't get the connection until the last paragraph.
good use of dialogue!
**THIS SPARKLES**
Thanks for the "modern", "up-dated" version of Jesus' life. :) Good job.
I love the dialog and the flow, and especially the surprise ending! Great writing. A great read!