The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/08
Putting this in letter form is very creative.
I had a little trouble figuring out the relationship of everyone. I wished there was a little more "plot" to let me know why your father was away and why you spent so much time with your cousins.
Good ending. Keep writing.
Oh, I feel so sorry for Jesse, that he heard the same stories and encouragement as Joel, yet still does not know Christ. How sad. :(