The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
Hmmm, quite the change and surprise at the end here! I was wondering where this was going. You added some modern touches of going shopping, etc, that made it a little more realistic. Nice job. ^_^
05/15/08
Really good story. I loved the analogy.
05/15/08
Great story, excellent ending! A great picture of God's love for us despite our many flaws.
05/18/08
Oh wow! Wow! Love this analogy. My goodness, I didn't want him to marry the girl, either! Excellent piece here!
Laury
This is great! The surprise ending is quite inspiring (what love Christ has for us!!!)
Well that had me saying hmmmm too! This was good and the ending was totally unexpected.
05/20/08
You got me! I like the title, very nice job.
Congratulation on your well deserved win. Great job!
05/23/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. I really love this. The analogy was done so well. Excellent job with the topic.
05/26/08
Wowser! The ending blew me away. Well done. Extremely imaginative. This was one of my favorites in the beginners this week. With your imaginative style and story-telling abilities, you'll do just fine in the weekly challenges.