The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
Hmmm, quite the change and surprise at the end here! I was wondering where this was going. You added some modern touches of going shopping, etc, that made it a little more realistic. Nice job. ^_^
05/15/08
Really good story. I loved the analogy.
05/15/08
Great story, excellent ending! A great picture of God's love for us despite our many flaws.
05/18/08
Oh wow! Wow! Love this analogy. My goodness, I didn't want him to marry the girl, either! Excellent piece here!
Laury
05/19/08
This is great! The surprise ending is quite inspiring (what love Christ has for us!!!)
05/19/08
Well that had me saying hmmmm too! This was good and the ending was totally unexpected.
05/20/08
You got me! I like the title, very nice job.
05/22/08
Congratulation on your well deserved win. Great job!
05/23/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. I really love this. The analogy was done so well. Excellent job with the topic.
05/26/08
Wowser! The ending blew me away. Well done. Extremely imaginative. This was one of my favorites in the beginners this week. With your imaginative style and story-telling abilities, you'll do just fine in the weekly challenges.