The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
This was pretty good! I wish there'd been a tad more of story-telling, because it seemed like the end was a tad rushed to fit in all the details. Otherwise, I liked the beginning where she first met the family. ^_^
05/17/08
Nicely done, I felt the very depth of the emotions you tried to express.