The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/08
Very appropriate illustration of the topic for this week.

Work a bit on dialogue--some of this sounds a bit stilted--not like the way people actually talk in casual conversation.

So true that we often have no idea what is going on in people's lives.
01/31/08
Good title. You carried the theme through well.
02/02/08
Very good and right on topic. Keep on writing!
Laury
02/04/08
Thank goodness for friends that can see behind the masks we wear.I am a bit worried about the kids and their future, but this was well written and on topic. Nice norms, love Ken.