The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
What a fascinating testimony, written in a casual, conversational style. I enjoyed reading this very much (I used to love to play that way with Elmer's glue, too). Great title, fantastic hook.
11/03/07
I really like your ending: how you tied the glue into your topic again. Good job! It's too bad your Sunday School experience wasn't more memorable. Probably needed to go more than once to make some memories:) Thank you so much for sharing. Keep on writing!
Laury
You grabbed my attention with the title and kept it through the ending. You did a good job on this. Keep writing.
11/06/07
"maybe I really did find God in the Elmer’s glue!" I think you did — it just took it a little longer to "stick" to you. Sorry about the pun — I couldn't resist. Nicely done.