The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/07
I love poetry! I think basing your poem on Song of Solomon Two is a creative idea. I really like your refrain, "He is the object of their adoring He also sees in the desert, the wilted ones, they break His heart".
This is beautiful, "Every flower with harmonious sound, Make up a lively floral choir"
You have lovely pictures and thoughts in this poem.