The Official Writing Challenge
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Great! The aloneness and the answer are both well described.
05/25/07
Great description of feelings here from the POV of the Knocker and the opener.
A plea for entrance. The shepherd stand without. Good pov.
I felt you chose your words carefully and could feel the thought behind this. Nicely done.
05/27/07
Love the message here. Great work.