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05/25/07
Good poem! The repetition is a wonderful way to reinforce your theme.
05/26/07
This is a great retelling of biblical events. Very nice.
05/26/07
I enjoyed this. very good and meaningful verses.
Very sobering.
05/29/07
Very well-told story and message in this poem! There were a few punctuation errors that proofreading should catch, but I enjoyed reading it. My favorite stanza was "I wonder what his thoughts were on that dreadful day;
Such a Godly faithful servant did he think life would end this way?
He never even wavered as the sword came crashing down;
Herodias girl stopped dancing and John now wears a crown."
Thank you for sharing this! :)