The Official Writing Challenge
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And a beautiful presentation it was! Nice writing. Some editing needed .. find yourself a "challenge buddy" to proofread. It makes a world of difference! All in all, a good job. I enjoyed it.
12/16/06
A heartfelt accolade to a true hero. What a wonderful tribute to Jennifer's mom. Nice work!
This is a sweet tribute. Good job!
OOPs, The errors I thought I saw were not errors at all! No editing needed and the story is great! Sorry for my comment.
This is so touching, and well written, too. Nicely done.
12/20/06
I liked how Jennifer testified of the Lord's work in her life in front of her peers. With that part being so strong, I felt like the third reason she chose her mom seemed anticlimatic. Maybe the order could be switched so that it builds? Just a suggestion. Beautiful story.