The Official Writing Challenge
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This captured rather nicely the sense of grief and being overwhelmed by life in the middle paragraphs, and after reading this through a couple of times I decided I liked the use of very short sentances at the start. But just as this was hitting its stride, it stopped! Work on your endings, but this has promise. Keep writing. God bless. xx
I thought the writing was mystically "haunting" yet touching to the degree that it left a since of comfort and reassuring calm.
09/17/06
A lovely story and I enjoyed it very much. I think you captured this girl's mood very well, and also the comfort that Grace was able to give her. Nicely done!
09/17/06
A lovely story and I enjoyed it very much. I think you captured this girl's mood very well, and also the comfort that Grace was able to give her. Nicely done!
I enjoyed the sound of "prickles in the thistles"
and liked that the 2 women each represented their names, Hope & Grace. You also left the reader thinking!