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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Garden (09/07/06)

TITLE: It was a matter of Love
By Tim Pickl
09/07/06

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Bleeding, Jesus anguished in the garden that day
No one understood what was coming or what He faced
Already agonizing over the prospect of becoming sin
It was a matter of love, it was a matter of when

Rocking and shaking knowing the cross was so close
Through the bloody sweat in His eyes He beheld a rose
He envisioned the Roman Soldiers crushing his brow
It was a matter of love, it was a matter of how

Jesus foresaw the scourging and hate-raised fists
Soon Judas would show up with his betraying kiss
Jesus interceded in prayer for every lost soul
It was a matter of love, it was a matter of woe

Finally Jesus submitted to the perfect will of God
He whispered, "Not my will but yours be done"

It was a matter of love, it was a matter of when
It was a matter of love, how can you resist?


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Donna Emery 09/17/06
I really liked this! I think it would make a great song. You captured the atmosphere of the garden with eloquence. Well done!


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