The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
Your story is touching.
08/24/06
You've done a really good job writing this precious story. I enjoyed it.
08/29/06
The spelling of the name (Babcia or Bacia?) needs to be consistent. Also, Polish needs to be capitalized.

You have a strong, nostalgic style--good writing!