The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Excellent! Well done and well written.

God bless~
01/29/15
In light of your whole story, I appreciated your irony here. "not even High Priests could display any suggestion of household gods" And yes, they certainly did have some problems. Your tone is great in this!
01/30/15
Excellent!

You added so much detail in the re-telling of the story, and with the imagined conversations brought the whole scene to life without compromising the scriptural truth.

A great way to spread the message.

You should become a preacher:)
02/02/15
A wonderfully done retelling—and sadly today “religious” leaders still pollute with greed. Outstanding job on this!
Congratulations on ranking 15th overall! Happy Dance!
02/11/15
This is great work! Wow what an intriguing and telling approach to the topic!!!!! I love your style, its easy and gripping:) I felt like I was in the middle of a larger story and wanted to see it unfold!!! Great job!
01/11/22
As usual, incredible detail brings us into a familiar story. Great job.