The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww. I loved this piece!

Beautifully written.

God bless~
Truly, this is a wonderful piece of writing. I read the first few paragraphs a few times to make sense of what was happening, and when the lights went on, I was hooked! I loved this take on the spiritual world, and how you describe repentance cleaning the slate. You also highlight what I realised with my little girl - she was less than a year old before her sinful nature became apparent. Congratulations on a great piece.
Loved how you delivered the powerful messages in this unique and charming story! Loved it!
I love this peek into the angelic world (and your imagination). Your smile-worthy ending was great!