The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Great story and completely on topic. Well done.

God bless~
02/01/15
An excellent story, easy and engaging to read.
02/01/15
If only you could believe that no one would ever let greed drive them this far, but sadly we know it happens. Well done, captivating story.
Great character development, I didn't like Brett from the beginning and I didn't like him in the end.

Well written and perfect for the topic.
02/05/15
Great title for this chilling tale, one that could be from the front pages of today's newspapers. Wow! Nice work!
Congratulations on ranking 13 overall! Happy Dance!