The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Excellent work. I'm sure this will take notice with the judges.

God bless~
Nicely done. Justice prevails!
01/31/15
Yay! Fantastic! I love this story. Imaginative and well-written, with an ending that brings justice to a man's greed.
02/03/15
A well written believable story. It is sickening and chilling to know there were and are many people truly like this—many will come forth in the last days— who think they are right, but are so blinded and entwined in the grips of greed and evil! Great job on this.
Congratulations on ranking 14th overall! Happy Dance!