The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I got goosebumps at the line of the child and the curtain, for I knew what was coming. I want to hear more of this story! Well done!
05/25/19
Dramatic. It has the kernel of a book.
05/27/19
Wow. While she was enjoying her garden I couldn't figure out what it had to do with the topic. The story took a turn I wasn't expecting. Well done.
It’s not easy to write a compelling mystery in 750 words, but you did an outstanding job of it.
05/29/19
Creative. Compelling. Incredibly descriptive. Easy to visualize.
Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!