The Official Writing Challenge
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You have an amazing imagination! Some day, I plan on trying to write an allegory. I did find this hard to follow the first read through, but then caught on to what you were trying to say. I think the world is getting closer to this story being a reality. Well done!
05/27/19
This read like a cross between SciFi and Voice of the Martyrs. Well done. I like the distinction between how each character's realities of the same day/events.
05/28/19
Powerful take on this week's topic. It's way out there but my favorite story so far. The message is incredible. And all is not lost...the guard can't get her song out of his mind. Just what the Holy Spirit needs to do a work in his heart.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!