The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/19
Fits the topic, appealing characters, and thoughtful application. (Red ink: The paragraphing needs some attention.)
I chuckled throughout this story. I could picture some type of cartoon characters as your two pets- kind of like Pinky and the Brain! Loved the ending.
04/19/19
Loved it for its descriptions and its fun - and for the bridge to provoke a little deeper thinking. Well done.
This is a sweet story. I could picture the dog and the cat too. It's a fresh take on the topic with a great message. I also really liked the prayer.
04/22/19
I got such a kick out of this. I could picture Dopey Bob and Hodges. A fun piece with a meaningful point at the end. Well done.
I enjoyed this devotional with a really apt analogy of our actions to those of pets like Dopey Bob.
Very cute with an important truth as well.
I love the next to the last line. I'm still grinning.
04/24/19
This is the kind of dogged imagery that sticks in my head. I'll be looking at dogs differently on my next visit to the dog park. Good entry.
04/25/19
Ha Ha! Very good descriptions! It may be just me, but the incomplete sentences kept it from flowing smoothly. I liked the spiritual application and the last sentence.
Congratulations on ranking 13th overall. Happy Dance!